Lyrics: Cindy ------------- Verse1: Cindy was a big girl Beauty queen Cindy was a sweet girl Young man's dream Cindy took me places Never been Cindy broke my heart Left for the green Chorus: Doin' this all for you, 'cause you like it Writin' this song for you, 'cause you like it Going thorugh all these shoes, 'cause you like it Leavin' me all these clues, that you like it. Verse2: Cindy was a looker Made the scene Cindy took me higher Fall and scream Cindy dropped me harder She's extreme Cindy burned my mind She's surpreme ??? Chorus (repeat) Fadeout: Cindy wake up (repeat) ----- Unless shoes has special significance, may I suggest we change this line: Going through all these shoes, 'cause you like it to Living these painful blues, 'cause you like it or Going through all these blues, 'cause you like it or Going through painful blues, 'cause you like it Something along those lines. I saw the mention of a lyrical disconnect in irc last night: 00:45 < muhoo> ah, i see the disconnect 00:45 < muhoo> the chorus is happy, it's a love song. the verses are sad, it's a breakup song. Hmm. If overall we want this to be what you call the love song type, how about we leave verse one as is. Love then loss. And then make verse two love again, this time right... Will try for an all love song below too: ----- Verse1: Cindy is a big girl Beauty queen Cindy is a sweet girl Young man's dream Cindy is a looker Makes the scene Cindy takes me places Never been Chorus: Doin' this all for you, 'cause you like it Writin' this song for you, 'cause you like it Going thorugh all these shoes, 'cause you like it Leavin' me all these clues, that you like it. Verse2: Cindy takes me higher Building steam Cindy blows my mind now She's extreme Cindy lights my fire Shout and scream Cindy burns my heart She's surpreme ??? Chorus (repeat) Fadeout: Cindy wake up (repeat) -----